Scary Story Drafts one and two

 
Chapter one the perfect crime

The first chapter was about Jack putting a big wad of gum under a desk. It was 13 pieces of gum under a desk. Jack is the janitors kid.I think the reason he put the gum there to make his dad mad.








Chapter 2 What do you want to be

The second chapter was about them moving him to an abandoned school. He liked his old school and he wants to go back. Jack when he was in second grade the teacher said" What would you like to be when you grow up". He said" a janitor like my dad " every on just started laughing.




Chapter 3 L is for loser

Lenny through up because of the ravioli.Kirk was a fashion ad he was in all the magazines. Kirk is making fun of his dad and jack feels like punching him. Jack is thinking what to do to kirk to kirk but he couldn't because he has a reputation in that department.Jack was trying to get out of the classroom as fast as he could  because kirk was in there talking to the teacher and did not want to get in trouble.Jack was so mad at Kirk because he was saying stuff about his dad.


















11/8/10

Ninjas were  famous for doing  amazing things but not all of it's true. They can't walk on water but they can walk on land . They can't catch a sword. They would  cut their self . I watched a show today on ninjas .They can't do every thing you think they can.










1/5/10
One day there was this peace of grass that got eatin he went down the esophagus it goes into the stomach.Then it goes through the small intestine  and . Then it goes through the large intestine.Then it goes to the poop.




11/3/10

i fell and hit my_____ on a ____
the little____ cried becuse ____ did not know how to use a ____
the kid ___ in his pants
i need some___
the little ___ ate his mom


i fell and hit my butt on a person
the little girl cried becuse she did not know how to use a pump
the kid pooped in his pants
i need some icecream
the little kid ate his mom




11/3/10
i fell and hit my_____ on a ____
the little____ cried becuse ____ did not know how to use a ____
the kid ___ in his pants
i need some___
the little ___ ate his mom


i fell and hit my butt on a person
the little girl cried becuse she did not know how to use a pump
the kid pooped in his pants
i need some icecream
the little kid ate his mom






11/2/10

Writing

draft two
       One scary night there was this pea that could not sleep because of the.......giant pea monster! He is   mean scary and vicious.

       The little pea crawled up with mommy and daddy. Then the giant pea monster ate his mommy and daddy.

        Ten years later the pea did a movie on his mommy and daddy's murder. It was the number one movie in Peasville.

        One day the pea found out the giant pea monster was just a criminal and was shocked. All his life he has been terrified of the giant pea monster but he was just a criminal.Then  the pea went out to kill the giant pea monster. He brought a gun,knife and a few other stuff. He was not going to murder the giant pea monster until Friday the 13th.

        Friday the 13th came and the pea went out to kill the giant pea monster. He cut, him shot him and then killed him.

       When the pea woke up he relized it was just a dream,thank goodness.

draft one  
One scary night there was this pea that could not sleep because of the.......giant pea monster! He is mean scary and visas. The little pea crawled up with mommy and daddy. Then the giant pea monster ate his mommy and daddy. 10 years later....... the pea did a movie on his mommy and daddy's murder. It was the number one movie in peasville. One day the pea found out the giant pea monster was just a criminal and was shocked. All his life he has been terrified of the giant pea monster but he was just a criminal. So the pea went out to kill the giant pea monster. He brang a gun,knife and a few other things.

 He was not going to do this until Friday the 13th. Friday the 13th came and he went out to kill him. He cut him shot him and then killed him. What what was that i am in a dream thank goodness.